My visual poem is about beautiful nature. Nature is the world. I chose the topic "nature" because its everywhere and theres a lot to say about it. The visuals make an impact by helping the people who are watching my poem understand more about my topic and the words that I say throughout my poem. I really had fun creating my visual poem because there was more freedom.
Applying the special effects were a little challenging for me because I didn't know exactly what to do, Luckily I did have some experience from the last project. Applying the special effects were fun because I got to explore with the different ones. The music in the back round relates to the topic of my poem, which is about nature. It is very peaceful, calm, and relaxing. It also makes it easier for the audience to understand what my poem is about.
I am very satisfied with my results. Being that this my first time doing a visual poem I think it came out very good. I think I had great pictures, videos, and audio. It took a lot of effort because I had to go to different places to get pictures and videos for my poem. I am very proud of myself.
good visuals
ReplyDeleteneeds a better sound quality
good lyrics
good audio
ReplyDeletecover up the wind
good shots
Compliment:The shot with the seal was pretty awesome
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:Some wind sound in the audio
Compliment:The b-roll was pretty
Compliment: Nice Audio
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Need Audio of Music Louder
Compliment: I like the part where the sea came in place.
I like the music in the backround
ReplyDeleteThe wind was really loud in your mic.
The words in the poem was really cool.
I like your B-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better nothing.
I really like your B-roll.
I like your calm music
ReplyDeletebalance the audio of the b-roll
great use of the research terms
There was slight music in the background that I really enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteSome of the shots lasted a little too long.
The Audio was really well though out, and the words to the poem
Compliment: I like your audio and poem
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've evened out the audio a bit.
Compliment: I liked the Visuals and the cool pictures.
I like the audio.
ReplyDeleteYou could have leveled the audio so you couldn't have heard the wind as much.
I love all the b-roll shots you got.
Really Nice photos and b-roll.
ReplyDeleteI think that the shots with the wind in the background is not necessary to use as natural sounds.
Really Nice poem!
Great audio, text layovers needed, i liked the boars
ReplyDeleteYour photos are really amazing oh my gosh! Your shots were a bit unfocused at times. Your music matched the poem really well!
ReplyDeletegood audio and visuals
ReplyDeleteSome shots got blurry
good b-roll
Nice shots on the green grass and the flowers
ReplyDeleteBlurry on one shot but that does not matter!!
I LOVE YOUR POEM!!
I like your poems theme.
ReplyDeleteIf you had used a steady hand or an environmental tripod your poem would have been PERFECT.
Your b-roll was amazing, I loved your macro photography and how you got a shot with the sun peeking out from behind a cloud.
Compliment: You had good visuals. They were clear and matched with the audio.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think your audio could have been evened out a bit better.
Compliment: I like how you have a little rhyme scheme.
The shots of the flowers were really good! The first shot was really windy and a little shaky. Other than that you poem was amazing! Your picture were amazing!
ReplyDeleteVisuals were amazing
ReplyDeleteLittle bit of heavy wind through
Nice audio roll
good b-roll
ReplyDeletenice voice over
nice audio
love the shots
ReplyDeletesome audio was fuzzy and loud
great visual poem
I like the shot of the grass because the sun is on it.
ReplyDeleteThe shot of the clouds kept zooming in and out.
Your shot of the seal looked great even though it was on a less quality camera
Great shots of the pigs and sunrise. In the beginning it was kinda windy. Love the music also it matches with your poem
ReplyDeleteI liked the B-roll of the pigs; oink oink.
ReplyDeleteIn the beginning the wind was kinda loud, i think you could have balanced out the audio.
Your B-roll shots were really nice and very creative.